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    dots Submission Name: The Light of the Moondots
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    Author: Lareth
    ASL Info:    20/M/KY
    Elite Ratio:    5.07 - 101/134/43
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Misc/
    Total Views: 130
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 510



    Description:
       A prose from a werewolf mindset that I have adapted in my RP's... hope you guys like it.


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    dotsThe Light of the Moondots
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    I'll tear you open,
    and laugh at the sight.
    As I feast on your innards
    with fork and with spoon.

    I cry out with hunger,
    I scream with delight.
    As I howl in the night
    to the light of the moon.

    You beg me for mercy,
    but I give you none.
    You're a sight that I pity
    as I see you swoon.

    My body is twitching,
    the night has begun.
    As I bask and I wade
    in the light of the moon.




    Submitted on 2009-03-08 09:24:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wolves are my FAVOURITE animal. I've loved them since I was 4, which is a little strange considered the rest of my peers loved bunny rabbits and fluffy bears.

    Still, I really like this. Particularly the 2nd stanza.

    It's a great write, good job :)

    Yours, Iffy
    | Posted on 2009-03-09 00:00:00 | by Iffy | [ Reply to This ]
      I loved it! I never cared much for the werewolf until now. This poem was morbidly beautiful. It may just inspire me to make a wolf for the rp. lol *Stands up and applauds.* Well done my friend!

    The Fallen Angl

    | Posted on 2009-03-08 00:00:00 | by fallen_angl_2 | [ Reply to This ]
      -grins- -claps- Well done, Lareth. Definitely a side to you in the rp's that Im adjusting to...But I think it could go far. -smiles- -shakes head- Still. Use to Lareth being the all peaceful one ha ha! Cant wait to see what the wolf drags in -winks-

    ark Angel=

    (#1 Fan?! ^_-)
    | Posted on 2009-03-08 00:00:00 | by drk_angl_17 | [ Reply to This ]



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