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    dots Submission Name: Suicidal Girldots
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    Author: Gmann2
    ASL Info:    20/m/wa
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 5/3/55
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Depressed
    Total Views: 56
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    dotsSuicidal Girldots
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    Suicidal Girl
    Crying in her sleep
    Suicidal girl
    With secrets left to keep
    Suicidal girl
    Each step you take
    Suicidal girl
    Your just another mistake,

    Lose all hope
    And let things be
    Slit your wrists
    and cry for me,

    Suicidal girl
    Things will be okay
    Sucidal girl
    Please live another day
    Suicidal girl
    What else can I say,

    Blood so red
    As it spills to the floor
    Might as well be dead
    As you cry some more,

    Suicidal girl
    Your apart of me
    Suicidal girl
    I don't want you to leave
    suicidal girl
    Your mine to keep,

    Don't believe me
    Just walk away
    You've decived me
    Today just wasn't our day,

    Suicidal girl
    Bleed for me
    Suicidal girl
    Show me what I want to see
    Suicidal girl
    Someone your not meant to be,

    Keep your secrets
    And lie to me
    Forget about us
    And leave me be,

    Suicidal girl
    Slitting your wrist
    Suicidal girl
    A feeling you've missed
    Suicidal girl
    On the ground you lie,

    I'll hold you in my arms
    And wish it was me
    I'll tell you not to cry
    This isn't how it's suppose to be.




    Submitted on 2009-03-09 22:56:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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