Emo by Gmann2

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Submission Name: Emo dots

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Author:	Gmann2
ASL Info:	20/m/wa
Elite Ratio:	1.93 - 5/3/55
Words:	105

Class/Type:	Personal Quotes/Depressed
Total Views:	55
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	656

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Emo

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You diss
I slit my wrist
you cause me pain
I slit the left vain

You break my heart
That's where it starts
When you pretend to care
Well how do you dare
It's just not fair

So I remain
So damn silent
See my stain
It was very violent

I'm just a shadow
A part of the past
A part that could never last

My trickling blood
Is dripping fast
I hear a thud
I just lie and stare

I cry and wonder why
Why should I be the one to go
Oh, because I'm EMO.

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