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    dots Submission Name: My Pride dots
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    Author: Gmann2
    ASL Info:    20/m/wa
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 5/3/55
    Words: 343
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Serious
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    dotsMy Pride dots
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    My pride is my soul
    My soul immortal
    Break this body
    I’ll not ask for mercy
    Even undone
    I kneel to no one
    Me
    The only
    and one

    Make me cry?
    I’d rather Die
    Nothing is worth begging for
    Nothing
    Not money
    Not fame
    Not hunger
    Not love
    Not life
    Nothing

    I will not bow
    I will not break
    Everything you throw
    I’ll take

    In my book
    If you have no pride
    You’re not worth knowing!

    My pride
    My savior
    Makes me a god of thunder
    The worlds most extraordinary lover
    The deepest thinker
    Most profound feeler
    No one is my match
    No one is my equal
    I pity those who are not me
    They will never know what it’s like
    To take life in
    With pure greed

    Be you mighty
    Or meek
    Despair and envy me
    Look up to me and dream
    Of what you could be

    For my pride is there
    To guide me
    To remind me
    There is no one greater in this world
    Than me
    I am almighty
    Let the humble bow
    I will not

    When I meet my maker
    I will stand before him
    And look at his glory
    And take my pride
    And say ‘look upon it! ’
    ‘Isn’t it a worthy trophy? ’
    ‘Is love of my accomplishments
    My passing of time
    My triumphs
    My errors
    My glory
    Mine crime? ’

    Is pride truly the greatest sin?
    Did it not save me countless times.
    Kept me standing where others fell?
    Made decisions my very own?
    The essence of individuality
    In escaping conformity?

    If asked to part
    I’ll say nay
    ‘Saying but you made me this way! ’
    And go my own way
    Not entering another’s domain
    I’ll have my pride as companion
    Always by my side

    No one will get the better of me
    Not while my pride holds me
    For am I not unlike God
    Made in his own image?




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