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    dots Submission Name: Graduationdots
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    Author: Gmann2
    ASL Info:    20/m/wa
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 5/3/55
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Depressed
    Total Views: 56
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 914



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    dotsGraduationdots
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    Graduation day is here,
    There is nothing top fear,
    We are going to cross that stage,
    We are breaking out of this theoretical cage,
    We are getting our certificate of graduation,
    Never going back to this location,
    Leaving the thing we have been at for 4 years,
    Everyone is giving us cheers,
    Some of us are now going off to college,
    Trying to grow our vast knowledge,
    While still others are going to take a job,
    While still others are going to try and join the mob,
    But all of us are going somewhere,
    All of us are going there,
    Because we're graduating and we're leaving home,
    Going off into the world to roam,
    We will all have our own lives,
    We will all get husbands and wives,
    We will all grow up and maybe have kids,
    But we cannot do what life forbids.




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