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    dots Submission Name: 10 things I hatedots
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    Author: Gmann2
    ASL Info:    20/m/wa
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 5/3/55
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Rant/Depressed
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    dots10 things I hatedots
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    I hate how you left me without any sign,
    I hate that you moved on without saying goodbye,
    I hate how your smile makes me give in,
    I hate that your always making me want to caress your skin,
    I hate how you can't talk to me when she's around,
    I hate that when she leaves you look me up and down,
    I hate how you made a mark in my heart,
    I hate that you let us drift apart,
    I hate how when i say I hate you I don't really mean it,
    But most of all....
    I hate how you know I can't hate you.....
    And never will.






    Submitted on 2009-03-09 23:03:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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