Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Old Ways dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Gmann2
    ASL Info:    20/m/wa
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 5/3/55
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Love
    Total Views: 66
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 744



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsOld Ways dots
    -------------------------------------------


    I heard your voice the other night,
    The one that used to make me light,
    Don’t listen to much of you these days;
    It’s not a sensible way to live.
    I don’t wear my belts anymore,
    And I sleep completely naked,
    It’s not that I miss the old ways,
    I lost my ways, country sunset rays,
    It’s just that I’m not really sure if this is the ‘me’ I want to keep.

    I keep my face delicate and my mouth shut,
    Don’t wear anything too get involved or emotional,
    It’s not that I’d be turned away,
    I just wouldn’t be as promotional.
    I still have somethings, an image of unavailability,
    Unquestioned answers,
    Is this what I wanted to make of us?




    Submitted on 2009-03-09 23:04:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    171919



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry