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    dots Submission Name: Open Mindeddots
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    Author: Gmann2
    ASL Info:    20/m/wa
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 5/3/55
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Me
    Total Views: 64
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    dotsOpen Mindeddots
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    Take out the naked chance.
    Fill up your empty soul.
    Rise from the dead.

    Think of things and take an oath.
    Be happy,
    Be you.
    Can you be both?
    A soldier in the eye of an underdog.
    Save yourself, fuck everyone else.
    You want it all black and white.
    You want it all out of spite.

    Take me.
    Take you.
    Take us.

    What haven't you done?
    What's really the case?
    You've aimed the gun,
    Right at your face.

    Carefully empty out your burden.
    They take your pain and make it pleasure,
    They want your mind,
    It's a secret treasure.

    What happens when you think?
    What happens when you cut this rope?
    Will you be ready for the fall,
    Are you willing to cope?

    Take a chance.
    Something new.
    Believe in yourself,
    and they will too.




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