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    dots Submission Name: Kiss Me dots
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    Author: Gmann2
    ASL Info:    20/m/wa
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 5/3/55
    Words: 181
    Class/Type: Story/Passion
    Total Views: 74
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1308



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    dotsKiss Me dots
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    Softly, You kiss me
    and I wonder if there could
    Be anything better
    Than this, letting my body heat
    Smear the
    Winding cursive
    Love letter
    Sweet whisper ink
    I penned across your hand.
    Idyllic romantic passions.
    Graceful heat and urgency and need.
    If all is fair in love and war
    I will beg you to conquer me,
    Desperately.

    Mine,
    Every inch of you is mine
    And I will devour you shamelessly.
    Castle - building, sight seeing,
    Illusive allusions eluding.
    And suddenly, forcefully, a revelation:
    Your skin.

    Desperately, you kiss me
    And I'm pulled under the water
    Thrashing and screaming, muffled
    And lost, and feeling my life passing
    Dizzy with intensity of pressure
    And held on all sides.
    Manic panicked exaltations.
    Urgent tremor, and turbulence, and torrent.
    If you cannot step twice in the same river
    Hold me under, and let this moment flow through.

    Mine,
    Every inch of you is mine
    And I'll devour you shamelessly with my
    Fingertips and eyes.
    If you'll say it
    Again, say it ---
    Say it!
    Tell me you love me.




    Submitted on 2009-03-09 23:21:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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