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    Author: Gmann2
    ASL Info:    20/m/wa
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 5/3/55
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Depressed
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    I sit here and wonder,
    As my life comes to an end,
    Thinking of what I would
    Do if I didn't have you,
    I would be gone in an instant
    to be with you, to show that
    you are the ruler of my dream
    world.

    With every dream that I had in
    mind,
    the only on that came true
    was to be with you,

    So that I could be the other half
    of you and we could complete
    each other, through time.

    As I wonder about my life,
    My life could have ended by
    now,
    If I never found you.




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