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    dots Submission Name: Basic Love Equationdots
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    Author: lolavie
    ASL Info:    23/female/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 70/175/103
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
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    dotsBasic Love Equationdots
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    I've figured it out!


    Truth plus trust times time squared. All of this divided by communication and you get your love. You see, if the communication is zero...

    Well, you see, you cannot divide by 0 and therefore your love will not be defined....love will be undefined. It's no wonder most people cant define love...for them it doesn't exist.

    Do the math. What's your love?

    (Trust x Time^2)/Communication= Love




    Submitted on 2009-03-10 02:52:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is quite clever-- and your phrasing reminds me of the way a girl at work speaks so I guess you could say I bought into the authenticity of your voice.

    I'd drop the second "you see" and try to rephrase in order to leave out one or two or the defined/undefined repetitions.

    Truth plus trust times time squared

    I liked that


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    | Posted on 2009-03-10 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]


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