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    dots Submission Name: Wind Blown Chaffdots
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    Author: realpoet
    Elite Ratio:    6.51 - 904/475/311
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsWind Blown Chaffdots
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    When I feel like kicking someone ,
    though in fury or a moment of fun,
    there is a containment within -
    why am I bothered by such a moment thin.
    This opponent testinng,who,what am I,
    even he and I don't see eye to eye.
    The problem is the subject talked,
    reason doesn't always with reason stalk.

    Should I deny another to own a perch
    when wings aren't strong enough to search
    for food beyond the nest's stimulus
    feathering wings to search its jim-the-just
    to equate what is pro,what is con,
    for reason to scale its wall and go beyond
    the silt of limits in its stilled waters
    damed to leach over spill for barter.

    Thus within the back waters of reason
    spawnings happen as if in treason
    of the dam preventing reason's fingerlings
    to mingle in the greater pond ,
    bridging the dam of their hinderings ,
    to stir the silt of reason's bond
    for flow of waters across reason's frown
    that truth must be milled and ground.




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