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Self Freedom

Author: Jingles
ASL Info:    19.m.canada
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------I haven't written in a long time, but its my most personal write yet...Just give me critisizm. And thoughts----

Self Freedom

Through gratified illusions,
And morbid desires.
We succumb to the fires,
Within our minds pyres.
But what's to save us from flames set ablaze?
Only rectified stares within our sanctums gaze.
With distorted visions, we look to the skies,
As angels fall victims to the nights longing cries.
And to chip ice away from realitys chill,
We hold close to our hearts, memories to lay still.
Though deceit hides sacrifice, and tainted distaste,
The past holds no shackles, only scarred hearts laid to waste.
So dream the exotic, fantisize the chaotic,
Embrace the thorns of a now tiwsted fate.
And turn whats left of strength to the gates.
Bare witness to a eulogy that bleeds and screams,
And tears minds at peace apart at their seams.
And as demons arise, from our ashes, so despised.
Our reflections, opaque,
Will quiver and shake,
And eternaly fall ,to an internal stake.
With a conscience renewed and open, we'll grasp,
Our hollow whispers and bitter promises at long last.
We'll finally be free,
From self monstrosity.
And no longer shall I flee,
From merely me staring at me.
And so my eyes cascade,
With such a feint grace.
As the ghosts of my memories,dance upon my face.
And I will finally, be free, from me.

Submitted on 2009-03-10 07:36:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I actually loved this. I dont know if you can reply to this, but I take a course for writing at my school, and we have to bring in a piece of writing that we admire, would it be alright if I borrowed your piece?
It truly is amazing.
| Posted on 2009-09-11 00:00:00 | by Paranoid | [ Reply to This ]
  This is an amazing write one of the best ones I've come acrossed lately... but overall you could even change a few words or even take them out... but whatever goes into detail is worth writing about... Congrats
| Posted on 2009-03-13 00:00:00 | by Gmann2 | [ Reply to This ]

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