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Embrace


Author: Sephiroth
ASL Info:    22/Male/WA
Elite Ratio:    4.07 - 60 /67 /29
Words: 55
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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This is the stuff I write at 1 in the morning. It's pretty bad, but whatever.


Embrace


Never let go of this moment
Heaven could not be more perfect.
I close my eyes, we stand alone;
Nothing can come break us apart.

We stand here and think of nothing,
Our mouths speak not; our souls converse.
I wish that time would just hold still
Because the end will break my heart.




Submitted on 2009-03-10 08:40:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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