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    dots Submission Name: I'm Sorrydots

    Author: Survivor_Dean
    ASL Info:    42/M/Minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 165/186/124
    Words: 328
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsI'm Sorrydots

    Iím sorry for the way Iíve acted, things Iíve done, things Iíve said
    But when the world looks the other way, it makes it hard to get ahead
    I know that in the past few years, Iíve caused you lots of pain
    I never really intended to, because really whatís to gain?

    I will love you all my life, through good times and through bad
    I know Iíve hurt you many times, and thatís what makes me sad
    I try my best to be a good man, through all the things I do
    But all that I keep hearing, is how much that Iíve hurt you

    All that I ever wanted, was to have a real good life
    I thought it would be easy, with you as my loving wife
    When I think about my love for you, it makes me want to cry
    When I think about you being gone, it makes me want to die

    You are the woman Iíll always love; this much I know is true
    I canít imagine living my life, in a world that doesnít contain you
    You are the most beautiful woman that I have ever known
    Iím sorry for not showing you, the things I should have shown

    I tried to show you things in life that youíve never known
    Now I sit here by myself, and feel so all alone
    All the trials in my life, have really gotten me down
    Itís all so overwhelming, I feel like I might drown

    You are all that matters to me, Iíll love you till I die
    And every time I think of you, all I can do is cry
    I swore to God I would cherish you till the end of days
    And I would never tell a lie because it never pays

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