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Around The Bend
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Around The Bend
You sit alone, all by yourself
Looking at pictures up on the shelf
The pictures are from days gone by
Gazing at them, you start to cry
They are the pictures of you and her
Deep dark feelings they do stir
You used to be so happy with each other
Now you don't even talk to one another
Those were the days when life was good
You would go back if ever you could
And fix the things that went so wrong
To put things back where they belong
But you can't ever change the past
Who knew that day would be the last
That you two would together spend
You thought it would never end
But it did and she walked out
Leaving you with lots of doubt
Did she ever love you? Was it true?
Or was she just playing games with you?
You may never know what is right
Alot of things were said during the fight
Things you never meant to say
But sometimes things happen that way
You both head off your separate ways
With feelings of longing for older days
When you could speak and not say a word
Unspoken things didn't need to be heard
You each knew what the other one thought
Things like that you can never be taught
It's like you had a total connection
At that time we achieved total perfection
Neither one of us ever thought it would end
We didn't know what lay around the bend
Around the bend we ran into some trouble
When it happened it burst our bubble
We started to fight most every day
Until you decided you couldn't stay
So you went off with another man
And sabotaged my life's plan
The plan was together until we died
All I can say is I really tried
to make it work right till the end
After all you were my best friend
But you said you didn't love me any more
Then you turned and walked out the door
I was stunned I couldn't say a word
My crying and sobbing were the last things you heard
I'm trying my best to get on with life
It feels like you cut out my heart with a knife
I suppose someday it will be healed
When everything is finally revealed
So I bid adieu to my one true love
She was sent from heaven above
To be my wife right till the end
If only we had never gone around that bend…………..
Submitted on 2009-03-10 14:04:44
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