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    dots Submission Name: To My Lovedots
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    Author: Survivor_Dean
    ASL Info:    42/M/Minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 165/186/124
    Words: 229
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 649
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsTo My Lovedots
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    You're the woman I love with all my heart
    My soul just aches when we're apart
    I want to be with you night and day
    My heart cries whenever you're away

    I spent my life searching for you
    Searching for a love that's true
    I finally found what I truly needed
    My search for love is finally completed

    Now that I have my true soul mate
    My life I no longer have to hate
    I'm filled with happiness to the top
    My love for you will never stop

    I promise you this and much, much more
    In my heart and soul I'll always adore
    Your beautiful face and star filled eyes
    The loveliest things under the skies

    I'll cherish you more than you can know
    All these things I'll try to show
    You mean more to me than anything
    You'll know this when you hear me sing

    I'll sing you songs of love and joy
    Of wonderful things between a girl and a boy
    Then you'll know just how I feel
    And that I really, truly am for real

    I'll never forsake you for another
    I'll do my best not to smother
    If you need me I'll be there
    All our secrets we will share

    I'll stand with you right to the end
    You are my love and my best friend




    Submitted on 2009-03-10 14:08:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i think I may start following your posts it has feeling lots of it have you showed he these? she hurt you bad but forgive her if you love her so mutch even if she dosnt want you back itll help you heal in the long run
    | Posted on 2009-03-12 00:00:00 | by cha | [ Reply to This ]
      Aw! That's so cute! If only there were more guys like that int he world! I like it :) I can feel the emotion perfectly
    | Posted on 2009-03-10 00:00:00 | by Kaygrl | [ Reply to This ]


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