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I'm sick

Author: SamiScream
ASL Info:    16/F/SD
Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 17 /14 /11
Words: 66
Class/Type: Poetry /BrokenHeart
Total Views: 897
Average Vote:    4.0000
Bytes: 454


I'm sick

I’m sick.
Sick of waiting.
Waiting for you
To say yes.
I’m sick of being
It’s not worth
The pain.
You say you
Love me.
But act like
You hate me.
I can’t deal
Any longer.
My heart aches.
It makes me sick.
I gave you
And you destroyed
It all.
You just make
Me sick.

Submitted on 2009-03-10 19:03:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I can relate to what you are saying here, good piece
| Posted on 2009-03-13 00:00:00 | by Survivor_Dean | [ Reply to This ]
  should make it into an song, sounds like an song to me
| Posted on 2009-03-10 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]

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