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    dots Submission Name: The Great Unquiet - 2dots
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    Author: col13x
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    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThe Great Unquiet - 2dots
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    The Great Unquiet - 2



    aye !

    before the dark madness
    before the lost
    before eternal embraces
    before silence

    aye !

    and after time
    has waited
    too long
    and for too much

    aye !

    perhaps too late

    yet never stops
    in its yearning




    Submitted on 2009-03-10 19:14:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    aye!
    | Posted on 2009-03-15 00:00:00 | by Sethesin | [ Reply to This ]


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