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Lost or Found

Author: geekyslacker
ASL Info:    28/f/tx
Elite Ratio:    2.34 - 64 /41 /14
Words: 56
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Lost or Found

I am where one walks his own path.

I came from where they say:"Can I go your way?"

To the battle lost I maintain: "Much was accomplished even in dismay."

Onwards I go, still with naiveté.

Ill-fated to never achieve, I still imagine.

Unpercieving this reality.

I trudge on.

Submitted on 2009-03-10 21:06:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is very good! All battles aren't won, but that doesn't mean nothing was accomplished by fighting them.

I like:

"Onwards I go, still with naiveté."

That describes us all, but only a few of us are smart enough and humble enough to recognize it!

Nice work, pretty lady!

| Posted on 2009-06-04 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  I think many feel this way, going head first. but only some of them succeed in the path. we must be careful not to trip or fall. But as humans we stumble upon every rock we meet.

From this write i get hope. It may seem weird but i feel that when hardship is written about, it takes a form of perseverance. that is my opinion.

Hope the journey goes well (=
Be strong
| Posted on 2009-04-05 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
  Keep walking, if you always move forward, its hard to leave regrets
| Posted on 2009-03-11 00:00:00 | by lancerdrag0n | [ Reply to This ]
  wicked write . me likes it tooo much. never give up. stay gold lil bear.

| Posted on 2009-03-11 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]
  deep thought its alot to take in when i read it, ty
| Posted on 2009-03-10 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]

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