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    dots Submission Name: Joedots
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    Author: EllusiveEmber
    Elite Ratio:    5.51 - 16/17/12
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Riddle/Misc
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       I wrote this a few years ago at university, no-one seemed to be able to figure this out. Hopefully you clever ES readers will.


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    dotsJoedots
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    Religiously,
    At the break of dawn
    My mistress relinquishes me from my pedestal.
    Filling my cold bones with warmth
    And showering me with bittersweet kisses.

    Until tomorrow morning
    My love
    Adieu.





    Submitted on 2009-03-10 21:09:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Thanks much for stopping by to read one of my poems! I appreciate your comment and bookmark. Sharon
    | Posted on 2009-03-12 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm the oddball that gets her caffeine fix from diet Pepsi, but I certain got your message loud and clear! Great job animating the inanimate in this very clever poem. :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2009-03-12 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      This is gotta be about coffee! Us coffee lovers wouldn't be able to function in the morning without that first cuppa "Joe"! Clever and fun write, lovely lady!
    | Posted on 2009-03-11 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      ... coffee?

    (brain dead lately. apologies.
    it's like a riddle. all the clues can point to x or y or z and who's to say one is right or wrong or all but insane?
    but i think it giggles 'coffee' like a silly little school girl.)
    | Posted on 2009-03-10 00:00:00 | by etheror | [ Reply to This ]


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