This is awesome...The first three lines were a bit stumbly because there were a lot of words with a and d in them and they were rather hard to understand. But other than that it's awesome; it actually radiates some of the awe that you are trying to capture. May Allah bless our beloved Prophet and make us strong enough to do as he told us.
I love it ( :
I am sorry but it made since but not much. Now I understand the poem but it didn't flow, it's ike you tried to make it flow but it didn't work out. I would like to see more of a rhyme scheme or better free verse my friend. Also your words are great but try to use to many big ones because you should appeal to a wide audience.
i feel like im being disrespectful, if i dont give it a positive comment, since u wrote about the Prophet (may peace be upon him)
it basically sums how we need to live,just like what we learned in tafseer today.
Can we ever show true gratitude?