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    dots Submission Name: Only Say Nodots
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    Author: daughterofdeath
    ASL Info:    18/F/West Virginia
    Elite Ratio:    4.83 - 262/263/207
    Words: 191
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 142
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1107



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    dotsOnly Say Nodots
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    I don't want this
    To end up like my past
    But it seems like that is
    Where we're headed.
    I don't want to
    Repeat everything
    But it seems as if we
    Just can't avoid it.

    When you raise your voice I run away.
    I keep on running even if I want to stay

    I keep on trying to make this work
    Because I don't want to say goodbye.
    And you fill my life.
    If you were to ask me if
    I wanted you to go
    I could only say no.

    You may annoy me
    And make me mad
    But my life without you
    Would be bad.
    And you say that you
    Try to understand
    But I don't think you do
    As you hold my hand.

    When you raise your voice I run away.
    I keep on running even if I want to stay

    I keep on trying to make this work
    Because I don't want to say goodbye.
    And you fill my life.
    If you were to ask me if
    I wanted you to go
    I could only say no.





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