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    dots Submission Name: Why Must I Put up With This?dots
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    Author: rosealiehale
    ASL Info:    22/F/Las Vegas
    Elite Ratio:    1.65 - 72/39/25
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 1134
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 428



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       It is kind of teen angst times ten:D sooooorrrryyyy!


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    dotsWhy Must I Put up With This?dots
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    Why am I put here to die a long,slow,painfull death?

    I did no wrong...I was but an infant put here in this place you call home.

    I prefer to call it HELL

    My eyes follow every sour being in this town.
    Yet, I am not content with what I see.

    I can`t keep focus...I am loseing sight of what you all claim to see.

    So please , help me find it once more.




    Submitted on 2009-03-12 13:16:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Poingant stuff from you. Well written and nicely structured.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2009-04-22 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      Its ... lovely, i quite liked it
    Myself and You seem rather alike.
    In attitudes and Beliefs and actions and feelings..
    Keep up the good writings.
    ~Grr : )
    | Posted on 2009-04-21 00:00:00 | by GrIm:)ReApEr | [ Reply to This ]
      That was cool!!
    | Posted on 2009-04-16 00:00:00 | by vannamay | [ Reply to This ]
      what pain do you? there are so sorrow and anger. it show feeling inner being. good write
    | Posted on 2009-03-20 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]
      could help you find hope, just pray or do something that gets out agression,ty
    | Posted on 2009-03-12 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]
      Life is as you make it. If you think your life is sad, it will be. Being cheerful and looking for the bright spot will make your life cheerful and hopeful.
    | Posted on 2009-03-12 00:00:00 | by lancerdrag0n | [ Reply to This ]


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