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    dots Submission Name: I apologizedots
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    Author: Strator
    ASL Info:    22/M/US
    Elite Ratio:    4.09 - 160/142/67
    Words: 323
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    I apologize woman
    for all the seen and unseen lies,

    For the heartache and pain
    that brought tears in your eyes.

    I apologize woman
    for not being true from the start,


    For running away from you, leaving a
    hole in your heart.

    For ignoring your feelings
    and pushing them aside,

    Because I was too damn
    arrogant and pumped up with pride.

    I apologize for making
    promises that I couldn't keep,


    For building a foundation based on treachery
    and deceit.

    Being selfish and inconsiderate,
    I did what I wanted to do,

    Making costly decisions
    without communicating first with you.

    I apologize for not holding
    you through restless nights and stormy days,


    For my immature thoughts and my foolish
    ways.

    Instead of carrying your
    love with me, I just threw it on the shelf,

    After we made love I turned
    away, only thinking of myself.

    Your love for me was pure,
    but mine was rotten to the core,


    You caught me talking to another woman, and
    I had the nerve to lie some more.

    You cried your heart for
    me, while I was out running wild and loose,

    I destroyed the essence
    of your love with a lot of emotional abuse.

    I gave you hell woman
    by giving up when times got rough,


    I didn't slap you, I pushed you away,
    even that's bad enough!

    With all your emotional scars, I need to be kicked in the ass.


    Now I see why you build
    a wall around you because it is me you despise,

    But that's the price that
    I have to pay for all the times I wore a disguise.

    I pray to GOD that one
    day you will realize,






    That I LOVE YOU WOMAN, AND I APOLOGIZE.




    Submitted on 2009-03-12 20:12:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Very nice. Well the message, not that you were such an a$s. I liked the form, and your use of the word 'woman', made me smile for some reason. I hope she forgives you too, but I hope that you also understand that if she doesn't...well she has every right not to, ya know? Everyone makes mistakes, and I'm happy to see that you've realized the error of your ways, and you're ready to be the man that you should. *grins* peace and inspiration!

    Duv
    | Posted on 2009-04-24 00:00:00 | by Draumrkopa | [ Reply to This ]
      wow. so sweet! well, hope she forgives you
    | Posted on 2009-03-14 00:00:00 | by rosesrouges | [ Reply to This ]


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