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looking over you

Author: secret kisses
ASL Info:    22/f/uk
Elite Ratio:    2.81 - 558 /438 /138
Words: 164
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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looking over you

please dont shed a tear for me,
dont think that i have gone.
i am here looking over you,
my spirit still lives on.

i may have been young,
and you think it wasnt my time.
but things happens for a reason,
and this time the time was mine.

please cherish all the memories,
as i always have and will.
remember all the laughs and smiles,
and carry them on still.

i will be watching over you,
and help guide you along the way.
anytime you need to talk or cry,
i will be here for you everyday.

just because you cant hear or see me,
dont think im not around.
i will be in every living flower and gusty wind,
and in every pebble on the ground.

so let this be your last tear for me,
dont think that i have gone.
im here forever looking over you,
through you my spirit lives on.

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