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    dots Submission Name: Solitudedots
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    Author: Strator
    ASL Info:    22/M/US
    Elite Ratio:    4.09 - 160/142/67
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsSolitudedots
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    Sitting alone in my chair

    Sitting alone without a care

    The thoughts of uncertainty dwell in my head

    Not knowing tomorrow's plan

    And never sure if I should be alive or dead

    When I'm feeling like I'm neck deep in sand

    Sitting alone in my room

    Sitting alone wondering when I will encounter my doom

    The silence, a relenting shadow

    Covering everything at the moment

    In this desolate room that is hollow

    And here I am with its enchantment

    Sitting alone in solitude

    Sitting alone with the same attitude

    Forever sitting alone




    Submitted on 2009-03-12 20:40:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Someone that lives a million miles away from me once said, "You are never alone" when I was feeling this way. I don't quite know what he meant by that, because it usually feels like I am very much alone. Maybe he meant that we are never alone in feeling alone.
    We're never alone. Some of us are lucky enough to have families and friends to run to, even if they're sometimes very unreliable and it feels like nobody gives a [censored] about us. Sometimes it's not enough to have their thoughts with us. Sometimes you need a face to look at.
    No one can sit alone forever.
    | Posted on 2009-03-14 00:00:00 | by Lacrimosa | [ Reply to This ]


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