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    dots Submission Name: 80 mph on the road of Lovedots
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    Author: MinervaBlu
    ASL Info:    17 nowhere
    Elite Ratio:    3.51 - 287/303/232
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 89
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dots80 mph on the road of Lovedots
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    Slow down, baby
    You're going 80 miles an hour
    I'm trying to keep speed
    But, damn it I don't have the power
    You're crashing baby, hitting curves
    Pay attention to the signs
    Maybe, try the brake.
    Slowing down is fine.
    Don't think about the destination
    Focus on the here and now
    All these "little" collisions
    You keep having, I will not allow
    You're racing out ahead of me
    Losing sight, you've gone too far
    I see a detour, maybe a short cut?
    I'll have to try it to find where you are.




    Submitted on 2009-03-13 02:27:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Good MinervaBlu, a quick shot at the guy giving you no time for normal appreciation of each other. If he can't learn, detour for a while. Good metaphores, Ted.
    | Posted on 2009-03-15 00:00:00 | by edcherry | [ Reply to This ]



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