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    Author: EsCaPisT
    ASL Info:    17,Female,Singapore
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 42/38/38
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 684
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    Bytes: 577



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    My heart is heavy,
    My mind is fogged,
    My soul is restless,
    My body is bogged,
    Down by the pressures
    You showered on me.

    I forgot what it meant,
    To fall into a deep slumber,
    The peaceful, worry-less rest.
    Before I was
    Bogged down by the pressures
    You showered on me.

    Who do I trust?
    Who do I defend?
    Who can I rely on?
    Who do I call my friend?

    My heart is heavy,
    Bogged down by the pressures
    You showered on me.





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