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    dots Submission Name: taking back roadsdots
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    Author: joy7542
    Elite Ratio:    5.03 - 1034/952/203
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       a challenge to write a poem with the title of ... taking back roads... this is what came to me


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    dotstaking back roadsdots
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    reckless memories
    on a pathway of distant destruction,
    no knowledge behind
    the movement

    the cracking of thoughts
    beneath my feet,
    as they brake into a million tries and
    it’s never going to happen

    emotions fall around me
    as I try and catch one that fits,
    a hand grasping
    for sunlight, falling, falling

    I am taking the back roads
    to the place I want to be,
    pressing through the hurt
    to find heartbreak, never, never again

    passion like a fire
    burns through right and wrong,
    mercy stumbles into the darkness
    upon a crumbling soul

    the dirt of past
    rubs on the knees of a prayer,
    eyes fall upon footprints
    fading into a violet sky

    here I am, crossing the point of
    sunrise and sunset, darkness and happy
    the balance of spirit and reality
    collide, it's the

    scars breaking my skin
    making me remember,
    the road that brought me
    to the place I want to be.




    Submitted on 2009-03-13 03:29:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      everywhere i go, i find backroads. strangely enough, there is a peace that takes over me. maybe because when you're on one, the scenery is different. it's not traffic filled, and full of the clutter; at least where i live. it's farmland, and trees... or the river. i relax. i can breathe. and somehow my thoughts mingle with my surroundings. i can let my hand lilt in wind, be pulled by a force that is not of my making. hmmmm.

    i like this backroad that you speak of, that coming to terms, or at least finding a place where terms can be settled. the working through to the other side. and that moment, where mercy is to be had. when your heart feels a different kind of awakening, makes the madness of it all, worth it.

    i read this yesterday and am glad i came back to it. it re-affirms that there is a different place one can land if they take another course. and finding metaphors on winding roads (most of the ones i travel wind at least) is priceless.
    | Posted on 2009-03-13 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]
      Is this a conquest?
    Is this a covenant
    made to the lords of wanderlust
    the hoodied and dark lensed
    and anonymous?

    It may be so-
    cratic, an oath made
    to nomadic ghosts
    in search of homes
    for tired spirits laid
    to unrest

    isn't love wonderful
    just before the star crossed
    stumblers confess?
    | Posted on 2009-03-13 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]



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