Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Wasted Timedots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Survivor_Dean
    ASL Info:    42/M/Minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 165/186/124
    Words: 544
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 761
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 3028



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsWasted Timedots
    -------------------------------------------


    My whole lifeís been such a waste; itís hardly been worth living
    It seems that everyoneís taking and Iím the only one giving
    Iíve given so much I have nothing left, just for me to keep
    The only time I donít really care is when Iím fast asleep

    Iíve tried to do the best I can to live a real good life
    I didnít think it would be too hard with help from my wife
    I tried that twice, it didnít work, neither one of them tried
    After they had left all I did was sat around and cried

    Both of them decided that I wasnít worth their time
    And on trying to work it out they wouldnít waste a dime
    Marriage vows meant nothing to them because they didnít believe
    So they ran around and lied and did their best to deceive

    Oh well more time wasted, for what reason I donít know
    But for all those years I really had nothing to show
    My whole life was such a mess; I saw no point in trying
    All because my wives had a lot of practice lying

    They did everything they could to damage and to hurt
    By the time they were done, I felt lower than dirt
    I put my life into their hands and gave them love and trust
    But in the end both of them couldnít control their lust

    I guess thatís the way women are, they lie and cheat
    Then they sleep around with every man they meet
    Because of the two of them, I will never trust anyone
    Because the things that happened could never be undone

    Forty two years of wasted life seems like such a shame
    I never even had a chance to try to win the game
    I played the game as best I could, I didnít know the rules
    It seemed the whole damn game was made up by a bunch of fools

    Itís a game that no one wins some just think they do
    But the honest truth is they really have no clue
    When it all is said and done the winner didnít really win
    They found that there was no prize much to their chagrin

    What they really did was lost the most precious prize
    Everything they ever wanted was right before their eyes
    Too bad they couldnít see that I would have done anything
    That was what I promised when I slipped on the ring

    We took some vows that were supposed to last for the rest of our life
    That we would stay together through good times and through strife
    I just canít believe that a whole life can be such a waste
    But thatís the way it looks when youíre so easily replaced

    I still have a few years left to try to do something worthwhile
    Then I wonít spend the rest of my days feeling like Iím on trial
    I hope that I can do something to make everybody see
    That when things were all messed up it wasnít only me

    They were part of the problem, though they wonít confess
    So for the rest of my life Iíll have to live it in distress




    Submitted on 2009-03-13 08:13:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    172092

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry