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    dots Submission Name: I Did It Againdots
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    Author: Survivor_Dean
    ASL Info:    42/M/Minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 165/186/124
    Words: 319
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsI Did It Againdots
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    Well stupid me, I did it again
    Why did I think this time I'd win
    Same old shit on a different day
    Fuck it, I guess alone I'll stay

    Took another chance at love
    Nothings left now to speak of
    Got screwed over like before
    Suddenly she hit the door

    I wasted another year of my life
    Said she wanted to be my wife
    But I guess it was all a lie
    Didn't even bother to say goodbye

    Said she'd love me for all time
    But packed up at the drop of a dime
    She said she wasn't happy here
    Thought a move would bring her cheer

    Now she's gone and I'm alone
    Doesn't even bother to telephone
    Too busy running around every night
    pretending everythings alright

    So goes the story of my life
    another year filled with strife
    screwed again because I cared
    All my feelings to her bared

    she was sick when she got here
    I did my best to be sincere
    soon as everything improved
    she packed up and out she moved

    Tries to make me to blame
    Sorry, I've had enough of that game
    She didn't try to work it out
    I thought thats what it was about

    when you love you do your best
    to work it out, fuck the rest
    try your best to make it through
    the bad times and the good ones too

    I loved her with all my heart
    then she just tore it apart
    thats the way it always goes
    why that is no one knows

    I put a ring on her finger
    didn't even cause her to linger
    got a tattoo on her hand
    just like the one we planned

    I hope that when she looks at it
    She thinks about all the shit
    that he went through for her
    maybe then her feelings will stir……




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