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    dots Submission Name: Love is a Mythdots
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    Author: Survivor_Dean
    ASL Info:    42/M/Minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 165/186/124
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsLove is a Mythdots
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    Why is it things can never go right
    I do my best but it fails just to spite
    Things go wrong no matter what I try
    All I can do is sit and wonder why

    Am I that bad that I canít get ahead?
    Day after day Iím overcome with dread
    Wondering just what will go wrong today
    I know something will what can I say

    I am fated to lose in any situation
    Thatís the way it will be for the duration
    Things will go wrong I promise you this
    If things look good surely somethingís amiss

    Just wait a while and you will see
    Good things for me just can never be
    Thatís the fate that I must live with
    Love and happiness are nothing but a myth




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