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Author:	Survivor_Dean
ASL Info:	42/M/Minnesota
Elite Ratio:	2.02 - 165/186/124
Words:	172

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	806
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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Why is God so mad at me
What I’ve done I can’t see
When I ask I get no reply
All I want to know is why

What have I done to deserve this fate
Everything about this life I hate
No answers to my prayers again
He seems determined to not let me win

I’ve lost in all what else can I do
I just wish this life would be through
I guess the sufferings not over yet
I wonder how much worse it can get

I have no fear that I might die
I’ve done my hell though I don’t know why
I guess that is my lot in life
Never know happiness only strife

So it goes till the end of me
Love joy and happiness just can’t be
Pain misery and suffering is how it stays
For my life til the end of my days

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very emotional , you are leaning towards life unanswered questions. you oen your heart to this poem for us to understand you. great write.
| Posted on 2009-03-20 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.