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    Author: Survivor_Dean
    ASL Info:    42/M/Minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 165/186/124
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Why is God so mad at me
    What Iíve done I canít see
    When I ask I get no reply
    All I want to know is why

    What have I done to deserve this fate
    Everything about this life I hate
    No answers to my prayers again
    He seems determined to not let me win

    Iíve lost in all what else can I do
    I just wish this life would be through
    I guess the sufferings not over yet
    I wonder how much worse it can get

    I have no fear that I might die
    Iíve done my hell though I donít know why
    I guess that is my lot in life
    Never know happiness only strife

    So it goes till the end of me
    Love joy and happiness just canít be
    Pain misery and suffering is how it stays
    For my life til the end of my days




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      very emotional , you are leaning towards life unanswered questions. you oen your heart to this poem for us to understand you. great write.
    | Posted on 2009-03-20 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


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