This whole life is nothing but a joke
All my dreams are gone up in smoke
Looking to the future there is nothing to see
Because of things that happened, there is nothing left for me
Nothing good has happened for a year or so
It really makes me wonder why I shouldn’t go
Why should I stay here and live with all the bad?
All I have are memories of all the good we had
Now the good is gone, never to return
All the pain it brings makes my broken heart burn
It all came crashing down destroying everything I knew
All the things that I believed, were they ever true?
I’m so tired all the time and I don’t know why
Sometimes I can’t stay awake, no matter what I try
When I sleep my dreams are haunted by the past
Every night I go to sleep hoping it’s my last….
Good rhyming, very sad that anyone could be so downcast, a work that could be improved if writer aimed at even a simple rhythm and/or syllable counting. Thanks for posting it. Ted.
It was good.I will give you that.It was very sad and you could feel the emotion.You used very good imagery and I love that in writting.It wasn`t unclear at all.It was very nicely written.I would have liked it to be longer but, maybe thats just me:D
Submission Name: Why Stay
