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    dots Submission Name: If we were alldots
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    Author: Plegias
    ASL Info:    17/ male/ my house
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 37/23/40
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Serious
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    dotsIf we were alldots
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    If we were all normal, the world would be boring.
    If we were all insane, the world would be destroyed.
    If we were all sane, the world would be uninteresting.
    If we were all smart, the world would die out.
    If we were all dumb, the world would never be.
    If we were all strategic, the world would be a war.
    If we were all ourselves, the world would be better, for there would be no one to mock, no one to copy, no one to thieve, no one to be similar.
    You would be you and nobody else, a world near perfect, pure and simple.




    Submitted on 2009-03-13 15:35:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      like if we were all rabbits. a perfect world is the absence of human nature defined by humans

    cute piece
    | Posted on 2009-03-13 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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