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    dots Submission Name: A Contravened Instantdots
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    Author: StillimCold
    ASL Info:    28/F/California
    Elite Ratio:    5.99 - 88/87/36
    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Grudges, Anger, Fear.

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    dotsA Contravened Instantdots
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    Once, bravery shrouded my face,
    He took it, all of it in one night.
    Shame replaced my dignity,
    inadequancy interchanged my fearlessness.

    Suppressed cries; stifled pleas,
    Deafening roars; physical manacles.
    I wither away, waking up to a stranger,
    Forcing his body against mine.

    There was not a way to stop him,
    For he was stronger than I,
    I just laid there, barely lucid,
    Having to take what was being done.

    �No, please stop. No, I don�t want to.�
    �You like it. You asked for it.�
    Nobody there to salvage me,
    Alone with a monster; it felt like eternity.

    Finally blacking out for the remaining assault,
    Waking up, finding him touching me again.
    Afraid for my life, I lay quiet, barely breathing.
    He finally got up, and so did I �

    Leaving nothing, but all of my goodness,
    Leaving behind the notion of nobility.
    I left behind my honor, and my valor,
    Hoping one day, I�ll be able to restore �

    What used to be me.




    Submitted on 2009-03-15 02:47:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Aww, your making this salty dog cry, the debauchery of our unworthy is depressing. Conversely you couldn't convince me that there is no such thing as sanctity. I can hardly relate the denigrating debauchery of such degrading experience. I pray you can learn to rise above and leave it in the dust of your trail.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-10-13 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
      uck it makes me sick to my stomache because I know...The details are to graphic and the images are now burned into my head. My heart aches for you...
    | Posted on 2009-03-19 00:00:00 | by mrsramirez | [ Reply to This ]


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