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Forest Music

Author: doppelganger
ASL Info:    26/f/your brain
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Words: 101
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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I went on a walk in the woods today and it felt... odd.
So, in an attempt to break away from this writers block, I wrote this. >.>

Forest Music

Follow me, Mr. Violin man,
With your crooked hooves
And stalactite teeth,
Through this waking forest.
Fill me with your braying
Verses, they
Sting with the real sincerity
Of a pacifist’s carnal heart.
These thorns may prick
And tear my skirts.
The blood may rise,
As well,
But look at this, Mr. Violin man,
It falls and feeds
The roses.
Hear that hawk?
He hears you too;
In mourning for the faun.
So lets spread our blanket
Wide right here,
On the bank of this glittering
Shore, and brew our tea.
How sweet do you like it,
Mr. Violin man?

Submitted on 2009-03-15 04:15:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Pretty nice thought. You disrupted my thought and mental picture I had built when you put in "on the banks of this shore." Forests don't usually have shore banks.
| Posted on 2009-03-15 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]

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