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    dots Submission Name: Forest Musicdots
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    Author: doppelganger
    ASL Info:    26/f/your brain
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 34/223/160
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 552
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       I went on a walk in the woods today and it felt... odd.
    So, in an attempt to break away from this writers block, I wrote this. >.>


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    dotsForest Musicdots
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    Follow me, Mr. Violin man,
    With your crooked hooves
    And stalactite teeth,
    Through this waking forest.
    Fill me with your braying
    Verses, they
    Sting with the real sincerity
    Of a pacifistís carnal heart.
    These thorns may prick
    And tear my skirts.
    The blood may rise,
    As well,
    But look at this, Mr. Violin man,
    It falls and feeds
    The roses.
    Hear that hawk?
    He hears you too;
    In mourning for the faun.
    So lets spread our blanket
    Wide right here,
    On the bank of this glittering
    Shore, and brew our tea.
    How sweet do you like it,
    Mr. Violin man?




    Submitted on 2009-03-15 04:15:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Pretty nice thought. You disrupted my thought and mental picture I had built when you put in "on the banks of this shore." Forests don't usually have shore banks.
    | Posted on 2009-03-15 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]


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