i feel so sick,
sick to my stomach.
i can't bare this any more.
i've had enough,
i wish this feeling would just go away.
nauseated, that's the word that fills my mind.
| Very short and to the point. And sometimes that is just what we need.|
But I don't think that is this time.
So far, this is good. But I think you could drag it on a little further and bring more depth to it. Are you sick physically or emotionally? Did something happen to make you feel this way? Is it anger? Hurt? Betrayal? Or just a stomach-ache?
|| Posted on 2009-03-16 00:00:00 | by myownvitality | [ Reply to This ] |