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    dots Submission Name: Spring flirts like a mandots
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    Author: Peachpitt
    ASL Info:    26/F/away from you
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 107/144/72
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSpring flirts like a mandots
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    The Touch of Spring

    The dewy taste of Spring kisses my lips.
    The air stirs me with its sweet cologne,
    leaving its scent in my pillows and sheets.

    The sun feels its warm way along my arm
    through the car window and touches my cheek.
    Itís distracting.

    I canít work with the green outside
    making love with my eyes.
    Spring flirts like a man.




    Submitted on 2009-03-16 04:43:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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