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Spring flirts like a man

Author: Peachpitt
ASL Info:    26/F/away from you
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Words: 71
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Spring flirts like a man

The Touch of Spring

The dewy taste of Spring kisses my lips.
The air stirs me with its sweet cologne,
leaving its scent in my pillows and sheets.

The sun feels its warm way along my arm
through the car window and touches my cheek.
It’s distracting.

I can’t work with the green outside
making love with my eyes.
Spring flirts like a man.

Submitted on 2009-03-16 04:43:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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