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    dots Submission Name: on the wings of dreamsdots
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    Author: cha
    Elite Ratio:    2.3 - 37/28/31
    Words: 244
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotson the wings of dreamsdots
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    On the Wings of Dreams
    I'm flying free
    with a dreamer's dream,
    To a land without fear, darkness, and doubt;
    Where shadows and hauntings
    of all time and space,
    Are rainbows with colors that endlessly grace...
    happiness, hope, and all joys to embrace.

    A land with no storms, without pouring rains,
    where changes abound and great comfort remains;
    Where all hate is replaced,
    all questions erased;
    Where new memories are shaped,
    with wonderous light...
    of romance and love, before out of sight;
    A dreamland of heaven without jaded thought,
    where butterflies are free,
    their colors uncaught;
    With milk oceans to see,
    fresh air to breathe;
    Countless flowers and trees,
    fragrancing the soft whispering breeze.
    No more webs of deceit,
    where lovers have fought;
    No battles of hopelessness,
    where all love is lost.

    Maybe our dreams hold the land of our thoughts,
    Or maybe our hearts have learned lessons well taught.
    It is the stairway to heaven,
    this dreamland we seek...
    Hopefully for all is more than a peek...
    at a future end to the ultimate pain,
    of great loyalty and love...
    lost and estranged.

    This dance of life I endlessly write,
    Is an end to the pain, and every soul's light.
    To a life fulfilled at the end of our time...
    to dream second chances for new love we can find.
    Here's to all of us ending our heavenly climb,
    With the company of romance and lovelight sublime.




    Submitted on 2009-03-16 17:14:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Whatever way it is written the picture was painted and the thought was pleasing. A beautiful place where nothing is disgraceful and everything is joyfully found. Its dreams like these that keep others going, like life preserving. Above all as Iím trying to say I like this poem


    Faid
    | Posted on 2009-03-22 00:00:00 | by faideddarkness | [ Reply to This ]
      ok... the arrangement of this one is overall inconsistent... try again(or just change the beginning to better match the rest)
    | Posted on 2009-03-17 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]


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