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I won't be like this forever...

Author: Maranne
ASL Info:    17/PA
Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 1 /3 /7
Words: 115
Class/Type: Poetry /Venting
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Confusion...torn between two guys one sweet one obsessive.

I won't be like this forever...

I won't be like this forever
and I won't be with "him" forever,
I hate to say I like one "guy" rather than the other.
I feel like I'm living in a soap opera,
real life quarrels, as opposed to depressing,
sappy love stories. I wish to have
a wonderful relationship like in those stories. Even if some omniscient being tells me,
“This isn’t right, Marissa!" ,I won't care!
I don’t lead both of the guys on, ever,
do I? No! I’m a good and proper girl.
I long to know what I should do.
Even though I may not suppress my Confusion, at least I have my dignity.

Submitted on 2009-03-16 19:00:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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