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    dots Submission Name: Fallendots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 390
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Dear Friend

    It is always hard, knowing where or how to begin
    you are so far away
    and words cannot replace your faces
    I miss you with these words
    they do not replace your talk back
    those expression you make when understanding friendship
    and the collaborations of smiles
    these words just leave me some how

    My dear friends
    these days, recent, I feel somehow empty
    recently, it seems I don't know how to express
    my heart in all its impetuousness reflects devoided
    for some reason
    perhaps my heart is broken
    but why

    I fell in love

    But I cannot carry this love in my fingers
    or touch the fragrant diaphanous
    or break upon the skin; any kind of meaning
    what am I to do
    with this barking dog which breaks my concentration
    and leaves me replete, replete, yes
    but so vacant
    so buried

    So, my friends, I turn to you and ask
    what am I to do

    I have discovered in words
    the multitude of hearts and experience
    the light of different perception
    and fellow souls searching for answers
    have brought me their wisdom
    but I cannot contend
    with this silence
    this cramping back of inabilities expressed
    happiness and love left only to wish

    Fall in love I did

    And I find a weakness in me drives to
    stands on a strength; I never knew I had
    leaves me numb in exhausted out flowing ideals
    have deemed to suck me dry
    at the present point, pointless
    but brings me back to the essence
    of a first written scriptures truth
    and should I succumb
    should I fall
    forever more
    what then

    My dear Friend

    but in love; I fell and I fall

    Of late, there seems no response
    not well enough to mark
    or transcribe the earnest compassion I find in you
    I seem incapable; shell like
    but rather be harnessing the storm
    and bellowing wild
    and cannot

    I fell in love

    And through my heart this love remains
    redoubtable and torn
    broken by fate and ill-considered
    relinquished by the contest of my soul

    l Love her

    And in her I constantly


    What my friend, if anything, am I to do

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