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    dots Submission Name: Head in a Bucketdots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 403
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Head in a Bucket



    Somebody is responsible for all this
    This global economical terrorism
    Effects directly our own quiet peaceful lives
    We are being controlled

    Are we aware of this

    As we chomp away in our plastic bucket
    Scoffing our fill on lifestyled adverts
    Eating our way through
    All the things we canít do with without with

    Television generation of fashions dictation
    Of empty stomachs
    Selling every inch of perfection and heaven
    For the money we just canít afford

    Bought and sold back to ourselves

    While we listen to excuses
    From faceless faces
    Whose spiel of propaganda-ites
    Lays out their dysfunctional lies of truth

    They give horses a noses bag of dry grain to chew on

    Stuff and nonsense
    If you, or we, or I, should ever think as an individual
    They will roll out death from its dark and rotting catacomb
    And scare the shit out of you, or we, or me

    Humanoid head in a bucket

    While our future is bartered by someone
    For the things we already own
    And this the vox populi finds its demon
    Discovers its own voice in a reality show

    Do we really need all this
    Or have we become so immured of the techno-bubble bullshit
    That the very meaning of life and living
    Has been reduced to acquiring the latest trend

    Head in a bucket
    In a feeding trough frenzy of having to have
    And canít do without
    All the pampered squealings of piglets

    Our consent of ridicule is taken for granted

    We are the bricks inside someone elseís billion dollar palace
    We are traded by a consensus of avarice
    We are fooled, it seems, constantly, by a plastic bucket

    Consider if you will, the ludicrousness of a gold plated toilet
    Or a diamond encrusted mobile phone
    Such squander and abuse of wealth
    Should be globally; illegal

    Consider if you will, a bloated and malnourished child
    Or the medicines you cannot afford
    Such squander and abuse of life
    Is by the money, made; acceptable

    Somebody is responsible for all this

    This global economic terrorism

    Head in a bucket



































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