like the other piece it doesn't lay it all out on the table as far as spoon feeding clarity[although it's no rocket science either[
*I turned the bracket the rwogn yaw on posepur
ya know ya know.
but it's nice you could go back after the initial run and soak up some sun and gloom, where the first one was all about letting the mood meet the words somewhere inside and drawn out of you.
the repeat at the end is spot on.
I should be more diligent and check out who people check out all the time.
I'll come back and fave this only if the rest are crap
don't won't the sound of a dead bell shutting out the light.
I agree with stormyskies that this piece is one for personal reflection, which does not detract from its value to me. Not everything is a great observation of unquestionable truth and this piece gets down to some characteristics of humanity and dealing with life and time.
Submission Name: Too much to say
