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    dots Submission Name: Truncate the euphoria that bled into my wounddots
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    Author: TheStillSilence
    ASL Info:    20/F/Out in Outer Space
    Elite Ratio:    5.1 - 180/107/54
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 687
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       I've had writers-block for many months now. This is my first piece since; trying to overcome it...


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    dotsTruncate the euphoria that bled into my wounddots
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    the birds didn't sing their song to the leaves

    "She tasted like vinegar the first time I had her"

    the transcending sky prayers hummed instead

    The carousel he slid me on spun too fast

    he knew: their capricious demonic screeches would frighten the color away

    He had me in a champagne glass with an olive on a tooth pick and gulped me down with his eyes shut and head cocked back

    to him" the savages of flight sang in fervent. majestic tones

    He whispered that I tasted like sin, and reached for another glass

    their song ended in a hollow apology

    He ate the olive, stirred me with the tooth pick; the carousel spun too fast again.




    Submitted on 2009-03-16 23:35:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      There are some very provoking thoughts/words in this piece but the brackets make it feel very broken and hard to follow....for me anyway :)
    | Posted on 2009-03-17 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]


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