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Side by side we fought our way to the top;
Never did we ever come to a stop.
But then came the day when you stopped running.
I turned back and tried to used my items,
But you lay there, completely unmoving.
Time had not treated you well, my old friend.
I guess for you, this is the final end.
You will always be in my memories
For my only partner in life was you.
Thank you for that. I love you, Pikachu.
| The end to this was so startling! It was only until i had read it twice over that i realized just what this was about. I love seeing a poem about Pikachu! |
Even though it's about the poor thing falling for the last time. It's very melancholy for such a cutesie subject as little pikachu.
The second line sort of throws one off for a moment, maybe experiment with rewording it?
This was a cool drink of water, thanks!
|| Posted on 2009-03-17 00:00:00 | by CourtneyLynne | [ Reply to This ] |