This site will self destruct in 2 months, March 17.
It will come back, and be familiar and at the same time completely different.
All content will be deleted. Backup anything important.
--- Staff
Roleplay Cloud -

Sign up to EliteSkills

Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password

The Gray and The Cold

Author: Voodoo_Lounge
ASL Info:    21/F/OH
Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 408 /588 /171
Words: 58
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
Total Views: 845
Average Vote:    No vote yet.
Bytes: 364


The Gray and The Cold

When I sleep
I try not to dream
But they follow me
In an unending stream.
There is no rest
For there is no relent
Of reliving the painful
Hours I've spent.
I am so tired
And I feel so old..
Ready to give in-
I want to fold.
So terribly sick with
The gray and the cold.

Submitted on 2009-03-17 16:19:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!


  I like this a lot! i can see the picture within it. lots of meaning.
| Posted on 2009-03-17 00:00:00 | by Maranne | [ Reply to This ]

Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?