Convulsions

Author: Old Elite Ratio:    3.12 - 69 /98 /93 Words: 59

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Convulsions

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Beauty is for sale so trade in your beliefs before they go stale and obtain some trees. The only cost for your every desire as a lonely whore is an all consuming fire. Inferno for your eyes seems a worthy trade, but all you're offered is lies. Existence has been paid and realitys hands are tied.

Submitted on 2009-03-18 01:23:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Thats deep but its hard to tell which direction you want to take this piece. I like it, but I think you need to add a little more. Late J

| Posted on 2009-03-20 00:00:00 | by oononotthatguy | [ Reply to This ]

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