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Submission Name: Convulsions dots

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Author:	Old
Elite Ratio:	3.12 - 69/98/93
Words:	59

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
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Convulsions dots

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Beauty is for sale
so trade in your beliefs
before they go stale
and obtain some trees.

The only cost for
your every desire
as a lonely whore
is an all consuming fire.

Inferno for your eyes
seems a worthy trade,
but all you're offered is lies.

Existence has been paid
and realitys hands are tied.

Submitted on 2009-03-18 01:23:07 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
Thats deep but its hard to tell which direction
you want to take this piece.

I like it, but I think you need to add a little more.

Late J
| Posted on 2009-03-20 00:00:00 | by oononotthatguy | [ Reply to This ]

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