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    dots Submission Name: Frighteneddots
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    Author: Vermalin
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 15/29/21
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Mirror or Mask
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    Average Vote:    4.4000
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    dotsFrighteneddots
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    Dark at night,
    And the stars aglow,
    Crunching on gravel
    Down below

    And the windís blowing fierce
    And then it blows slow,
    The trees bend uneasy,
    Leaning to and fro

    And the fields have found a feeling
    That sucks me from my gaze,
    And Iím living in the darkness
    Where only darkness stays,

    Flying to the Frightening,
    Lost within strange fear:
    I turn my head and look away -
    The Frightening is too near.




    Submitted on 2009-03-18 03:07:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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